‘It’s my birthday on the 21st of December, and there’s nothing I want more than Jacob and Arno to take me at the same time. Jacob’s rough London accent mixed with Arno’s smooth French accent whilst they dirty talk me would be the best birthday present ever.’
Today is my birthday (19th of Dec), and without me knowing, Jacob has found out about a kink of mine. I am into BDSM, and it’s obvious that the thought excites him….
After a day of surprises, presents and food, he suggests going out to a club, to party the night away. I get ready, and we go to the club, which looks kind of familiar. We go in…. I knew it, it was the Carpe Noctem, a goth and BDSM night club, run by a mesmer by the name of Vex. Said mesmer had a flirty smile on his face, as he led us to an underground room, fitted out with all sorts of toys.
Before I knew what was happening, I found myself strapped up to a frame, then spanked with a whip, crying out each time it landed. I was getting aroused by this, and both boys could tell. I screamed as Vex shoved a vibrator into my soaking pussy, while Jacob speared me from behind. 5 mins later, I came, the orgasm ripping through me. Both boys were sadistic in torturing me.
Once I was spent and on the verge of passing out, Vex unstrapped me, and Jacob took me home.
Writing couples is both enchanting and exhausting. How do you make people ship your couple? How do you make them an OTP? How do you make your couple matter to the story? Or matter at all? To answer all these questions, I’ll explain three major must-have characteristics for couples:
1. Realism
Falling in love is a slow process. It’s different from person to person. People are flawed. Relationships are flawed. People make mistakes. People fear rejection. Not everyone will find their soulmate exactly when they need most. People show love in different ways. People are not flirty all the time. Realism is important. Development is essential.
When writing a couple, visualize yourself as one of the characters (or
both). Imagine their love story as if it was happening to you in real
life. See how different it goes? Maybe not as fast and a thousand times
clumsier, but also charming and interesting.
Example of strong realism: Carl and Ellie (UP), they take a lifetime to mature their love and mutual respect. Neither are perfect. The relationship goes through bad times, but their love only grows.
Example of weak realism: Caine and Jupiter (Jupiter Ascending), they fall in love in two or three days, not enough scenes are dedicated to developing the relationship. In the end, it feels strange.
2. Balance
Give your couple opposite but complementary features. This is basically the Yin-yang symbolism that a lot of stories shows. If one character is all love-and-peaceful, maybe the other is a furnace of anger. If one traveled the whole world, maybe the other never left their village. If one is a millionaire, maybe the other is homeless. If one is short with dark hair, maybe the other is tall with light hair. However, no matter how opposite they are, always keep the balance. One shouldn’t overshadow the other. They must shine together, but also as individuals.
Example of strong balance: Fix-it Felix Jr. and Sargent Calhoun (Wreck-It Ralph), they belong to different worlds, they would probably never meet. He is a sweet pie that always tries his best, a peacemaker. She is, on the other hand, an explosion, a warrior. They are both relevant in achieving victory. Also, both are the heroes of their own games.
Example of weak balance:
Sasuke and Sakura (Naruto), he is way more powerful than her, he doesn’t respect her as a ninja, he doesn’t like working with her. He tried killing her more than once and was never sorry about that. She accepts being overshadowed. She lacks character development compared to Sasuke. There is no opposite-complementary features tying them. It’s unbalanced.
3. Synergy
Make them work together. Make them accomplish common goals. Make them a power duo. Make them laugh of the same jokes. Make it easy and natural for them to be together, talking, sharing and having a good time. Make their conversations flow. Make it easy to touch, and stare, and embrace, and kiss. Make their mind and body work together.
Example of strong synergy: Cat Noir and Ladybug/Adrien and Marinette
(Miraculous Ladybug), they are the heroes of Paris. No, they are partners in saving the world. It doesn’t feel uncomfortable when they interact, fight and save each other. It feels right. It feels natural. You crave for interactions.
Example of weak synergy: Kim Tan and Eun-Sang (The Heirs), they are the type of couple that are always fighting, but sometimes indulge in a passionate kiss. However, there’s no synergy between these characters. They are never on the same page. They are never partners. The magic of their relationship never sparkles. Even their kisses are uncomfortable to watch.
Now, think of your favorite couples (even non-canon ones) and try spotting the realism, the balance and the synergy in them. If you ship it,I’m pretty sure it’s there.
Try applying these characteristics to your next writing.
I have a little obsession with Matt Murdock right now and I believe that Jacob and I can easily seduce him. I’m a bit straight-forward but Jacob likes to play with the ‘victim’ of his sexual endeavors. It is like a good cop/bad cop kind of thing. I imagine three of us sitting at the table somewhere in crowded club with Matt between us. Because of his enhanced senses he can hear us even when the music is too loud. He can’t see what we are doing but he can feel it. Jacob exhales near Matt’s ear and he trembles while my hand travels down his muscular chest to his trousers. I grab his half-hard cock through the fabric, making him moan. Jacob smiles at me wickedly and then kisses Matt hard, playing with his tongue. It is turning on for me to watch them and I swallow, knowing that Murdock can hear me doing that.
I have undone the fly on his jeans, finally able to touch his bare dick with my cold fingers. Matt groans louder but Frye turns his head and kisses him again, silencing him. “If only you could see yourself right now. Your cheeks are flushed and it is visible even in this dark club,” I say seductively as his cock twitches in my hand.
“I can smell your arousal from here,” Matt whispers, licking his lips. “Arousal of both of you… fuck!” He’s desperate and frustrated because the smell of sex is teasing his nose mercilessly.
“I’d fuck you right on this table, Matty,” Jacob licks his earlobe, breathing hard. “I don’t need a super hearing to know that your heart is beating super fast now.”
“He’d love that, don’t you, Matt?” I giggle, stroking his cock, exposing his pink little head. “Please…” Murdock begs in the cutest voice possible. “He’s so needy,” Frye chuckles and his hand joins my under the table as both of us caress his shaft. Jacob’s thumb sweeps the drop of pre-cum from the tip.
“Oh my God, have mercy on me!” Matt moans. “What a naughty boy! Are you not ashamed to talk to God at the moment? When doing such dirty things…” Jacob smiles again and bites Matt’s neck skin. “Ah, please, just let me cum already, I can’t take it anymore! Please!”
“Well, you asked so nicely,” I say, looking at Jacob. He nods and together we make Murdock spatter his seed over his dark jeans as he catches his breath, trying to calm down. “We are at your service any time,” I kiss Matt gently and Jacob does the same, before we leave him on his own, still flushed and confused.
Grazie mille for your kind words, @madamretto! You have been one of our most loyal patrons and it is no surprise that around 20% of Jacob’s confessions are yours! It makes us wonder if there is someone else who has confessed more than you. Certainly not any of us mods! 😉
With the number of confessions Jacob got (and is still getting) we think that it is inevitable that not every one of those would be satisfying to you. We all have our preferences – and that’s okay! What’s most important is Jacob and all of the AC characters have inspired us and are instrumental in making us understand our sexuality more. We think a lot of our silent patrons are still very shy in confessing their dirty thoughts even in the guise of anonymity, but we think that for every patron like you who confess without shame they would be emboldened to come out and make their own confessions as well! So, we thank you very much – and everyone else who has shared with us – for not only supporting the bordello, but also for inspiring other people!
